[Tavian]

Author's Note: Dang! Im so mad that my story got deleted cuz I didn't save it. Though I've been writing a new story called Street Love. This story is centered around Ashanti being 16 and pregnent with an abusive boyfriend. Alot different and there's no Nelly in it. Tell me what you think and I'll start it soon.

[PlasticFace101]

Sounds good! My story got deleted as well :(
I have to start from scratch.

[Tavian]

Hi my name is Ashanti and I'm 18 yrs old. I'm yung shld b livin da life bt i'm nt. Dat all changed wen I met my abusive bf Nasil he's 24. I remember dat nite I met em. Josarah's 16th B-day about 2 yrs. ago.
J- hey Shan dnt u lk cute
A- hey Jo dis party is popen
J- dnt I knw nw i'm 16
A- yea bt its jus antha yr
J- jus antha yr sweet 16
A- no biggy
J- wat eva
Thats wen Nasil walked threw da door wit his crew. Yellow, blue eyes, lng curly hair, tall, and buff. He lked me up an down.
J- damn Shan u starin hard
A- wat no i'm nt
J- yea u r
A- so he fine
J- i knw sexy datz my olda cuz Jay friend
A- Hw Jay knw em if we dwn South and he up North?
J- dey met awhile bak
A- oh ok
J- if u dnt jump on dat i will
A- lol girl plz u cn hav em i aint given up nthen
J- I cnt believe ya ass stl a virigin hangin round me
A- well evrybdy aint hot n da ass
J- shut up! Ashanti
A- wat eva Josarah
We shared a laugh an Nasil came ova
N- hey Jo u growin up girl
J- hey Nasil u gten old
N- dis ya friend
J- yea my bff Ashanti Nasil Nasil Ashanti
N- dats tite i lyk dat
A- thank u
We talked an danced dat whole nite 2 wks lata we made it official. The nite i became a woman was da nite of our 6 mth anv. He made it special rose petals n da tub, chocolate strawberries, lites down low, an maxwell da whole 9. Dat nite was painful an pleasurable. Feb 14th an it was also da nite we conceived our daughter Kileigh Maynea Rivera. Abt 14 wks lata I found out I was pregnant. I was scared I was jus 16 wat was I goin 2 do wit a baby? At 1st I dreaded tellin Nasil. Da 1st person i tld was Jo we bn bff since Knd.

[youngd13]

that's messed up that your story got deleted. It happened to me a while back..
Good luck with your new story i hope it does well.

[Jada.Samira]

I'm mad ya story got deleted too. I loved it!!! But I'm likn this one so far too so keep it comin.

[Mz.Dj]

Im likin this story already H8 ur otha story got deleted it was gud I njoy'd readin it

[Brina]

Nice read so far. Continue Please. T4P. :biggthumpup:

[Tavian]

I found my other story but I have writer's block so, I'm jus gonna work on Street Love for now

[missy1988]

liking it so far
continue

[Tavian]

Thanks for all the comments and I'm glad that yall are liking dis story wen I get time I will reply

[Rae!]

Damn she got pregnant her 1st time! SHAN MAKE DAT NICCA STRAP UP! >:0 anyways this sounds REALLY good! Keep it going! :)

[Tavian]

Hey yall wen eva I get a chance I'll update promise now dis semseter I have a computer class

[Jada.Samira]

Tavian, on 22 January 2010 - 07:32 AM, said:

Hey yall wen eva I get a chance I'll update promise now dis semseter I have a computer class

Woot woot!!!

[Tavian]

I was gna update today but I forgot my story cuz dis one is pre-written so, weneva I get it I'll update

[Tavian]

Flash bak:

<P dir=ltr style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px"> J- omg i cnt believe it
A- well i am
J- wat u goin 2 do?
A- idk
J- u tld Nasil yet?
A- no
J- u betta tell em
A- i will

Dat evenin i tld Nasil he was just as shocked.

N- damn Shan u is
A- yea
N- damn
A- if u dnt want it
N- no i do imma tak care of us ok
A-ok

He tk me hm my ma was hm my dad lft us way b4 i was born. I was my ma's only child her miracle. So i tht she wld b happy.

Mayena- Ashanti Mayana Battle i cnt believe u
A- ma it was 1 time
M- 1 time my a** ya 1st time out an lk where it gt u
A- im srry
M- dnt say srry 2 me im nt dat bby
A- well i want it an Nasil gonna take care of us
M- umm huh he 22 he ain't worried wit ya a** im f***** 35 i aint round here gettin knocked
A- u f****** 2
M- shut up im grown jus cuz u pregnant u aint tld u u was gonna gt enoff hangin wit Ms Josarah
A- she my bff
M- wat eva least she smarter her a** aint lt her self gt pregnant if u stay here u going 2 da clinic
A- im nt abortin
M- well pk ya s*** an leave

An dats wat i did. My daughter was born Nov 28@ 2:08 am afta 16 hrs of labor she was here. Flash bak endz Kileigh jus turned 1 i graduated bt colleges on hold.

[Jada.Samira]

Where did she go??? Nd damn, thnx 4 da support mom. Not evn a lor bit. Jus get an abortion or paq ya ish. I wish my mova wld tell me that.

[Rae!]

DAMN!

[Tavian]

Nasil dnt mak me work jus take care of da house. I havent spoken 2 my ma since dat nite. Me an Jo stl kp n touch she went 2 A&T. I'm proud of my girl wish dat waz me. I'll gt dere 1 day. Its 12 noon Sat Nasil on da block his usual an Ki's taken a nap. I gt up an go 2 her play rm her toys r evry where. I pick em up an pt em n da rite spt. Da house phn rings I go bak 2 da rm an gt it.


N-wat ya ass doin?
A- jus gt dne cleanin Ki play rm
N- gd imma b hm @ 6 i want steak, corn, cabbage, fries, an salad
A- we dnt gt dat here
N- take ya ass 2 da store
A-bt Ki slp
N- so

He hangs up I gt dressed an gt Ki dressed she stl slp thank u. Wen I pt her n her seat she wake up cryin. I hand her sipee cup to her.

Ki- ma
A- wats wrong Ki?
Ki- ice
A- u want ice cream?
Ki- yea
A- we gonna gt sum @ da store

I take her out her seat she walks an holds my hand. Evry 1 tells me hw adorable she iz. Dis lil boy who bt 2 speakz Spanish 2 Ki she jus giggles. I pt her n da buggie. We gt every thing even our fav Strawberry ice cream. N line da cashier rings da stuff up an I bag it, pay, an we leave. @ hm I wash Ki up an she takes antha nap. I gt n my pjs an lay nxt 2 her n our bed. Nxt thng u knw i'm out lyk a lite. I wake around 4 2 fix dinner. Ki n da livin rm wit her thumb n her mouth on da couch watchen Tinker Bell 4 da 18th time.

[Tavian]

Tavian, on 27 January 2010 - 07:36 AM, said:

Nasil dnt mak me work jus take care of da house. I havent spoken 2 my ma since dat nite. Me an Jo stl kp n touch she went 2 A&T. I'm proud of my girl wish dat waz me. I'll gt dere 1 day. Its 12 noon Sat Nasil on da block his usual an Ki's taken a nap. I gt up an go 2 her play rm her toys r evry where. I pick em up an pt em n da rite spt. Da house phn rings I go bak 2 da rm an gt it.


N-wat ya ass doin?
A- jus gt dne cleanin Ki play rm
N- gd imma b hm @ 6 i want steak, corn, cabbage, fries, an salad
A- we dnt gt dat here
N- take ya ass 2 da store
A-bt Ki slp
N- so

He hangs up I gt dressed an gt Ki dressed she stl slp thank u. Wen I pt her n her seat she wake up cryin. I hand her sipee cup to her.

Ki- ma
A- wats wrong Ki?
Ki- ice
A- u want ice cream?
Ki- yea
A- we gonna gt sum @ da store

I take her out her seat she walks an holds my hand. Evry 1 tells me hw adorable she iz. Dis lil boy who bt 2 speakz Spanish 2 Ki she jus giggles. I pt her n da buggie. We gt every thing even our fav Strawberry ice cream. N line da cashier rings da stuff up an I bag it, pay, an we leave. @ hm I wash Ki up an she takes antha nap. I gt n my pjs an lay nxt 2 her n our bed. Nxt thng u knw i'm out lyk a lite. I wake around 4 2 fix dinner. Ki n da livin rm wit her thumb n her mouth on da couch watchen Tinker Bell 4 da 18th time. @ 5:30 dinners dne i set da table. At 6 Nasil makes it n. Ki runs ova 2 em an he picks her up an kisses her face. (N Spanish)

N- Hola Bella
Ki- Da
N- sumthen smellz gd lts c wat ma made
A- hey Nasil
N- da food lk gd it betta fucken taste gd
Ki- oo da
N- srry Ki

I take Ki 4rm em an pt her n her high chair. Its always silence @ da table. Wen dinnerz ova I pt Ki n her crib an go wash dishes. Wen i'm dne I gt n bed. As sn as he gt out da shower he spreadz my legs. Checkin me to make sure I wasn't fucken no 1 else.

N- u bn a gd girl nw u knw what papi want
A- im tired Nasil

[Tavian]

Sorry guys dat quote was antha update read it cuz it is an update!